Der Fluch des Grals

Technical
Track failed clearance test at the top of the lift hill.Trackwork was reasonable although you had some shaping issues - especially in the inversion. The apex was far too drawn out so you need to give it more of a 'point'. You also needed to fix the banking on the helix - it had too much banking for the radius of the turn. To fix this either have less banking or make the helix much smaller.You supports were also alright - but there was some work needed to make them workable. Technically wise you needed some more support on your immelman and also at the exit to the final turn. You also had a laterally braced support just before the helix that was so close to the ground the lateral bracing was redundant.I enjoyed the scenery - I thought everything was done reaosnably well and tied into itself well. The ride did have a consistant theme and I liked the feeling of being in a huge village. Not sure why you used market stalls instead of benches though!

Adrenaline
I thought your ride did pace pretty well - I think the main improvement would again being tightening up that helix just to give a proper sense of speed. You used the tunenels and low to the ground airtime hill to really generate a good feeling of speed at the beginning of the ride too.I thought the layout was good - for a short ride it really encompassed everything you'd like to see ina dive machine. Big drop, couple of inversions alongside an airtime hill and what would have been a decent helix.G-Forces were mostly kept in check - I'm not sure -0.9g would be super comfortable in dive machine restraints however, and your helix banking caused some unwanted lateral G's.

Originality
I thought you did a good job with the layout originality wise - the little airtime hill before the immelman was a nice touch and whilst a lot of the ride resembled the newer small scale dive machines I think you set yours apart from these fairly well. The scene you set was really good and certainly gave the ride an original feel.

Realism
As mentioned in the technical section your trackwork could have done with some fixing to make it more realistic. You also needed to work on the supports too - some areas you ahd vertical connectors when in reality a horizontal connector would have been far better.I thought the scenery was realistic and well done for the most part - there was a vast amount of unused buildings that I feel that if it were creating in real life - these would be utilized for shops and the like.The ride felt buildable to me - everything you did seemed pretty plausible in my opinion.

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the music was good I liked you had to go on a mini adventure through a castle to get to the train the coaster and elements you implemented were good for this dive coaster