Predator

Right, so first i am going to start with the track work, it was okay in some parts but it was quite jolty and rough, the layout was good for an intamin invert and the heartline roll at the end was the best part. Would it make it to a theme park? Yes, but the trackwork and profiling would need to be improved for intamin's standard expectations

T: passed E-Stop, has Storage, didn??t find any Errors, the Q Station and the other "Theming Objektives" are looking fine, the Supports are good and I can see that u put work into them but u did 2 mistakes: 1 u have used the wrong connectors (u have the B&M??s instead of Intamins) and 2 some of the Supports dosen??t look like typical Intamin Supports but Overall this was a good work
A: the ride has nice G??s and Inversions, the Layout itself is cool, it??s the right lenght for such a coaster and I loves the ending with the heatline roll. In the Corscrew the lat. G??s are a bit too high but this is ok, the trackwork is pretty smooth (could be done at some Points a bit better but Overall this was a smooth ride).
O: The coaster is very original, also because there aren??t so many Intamins Inverts out there but the Layout Itself is unique.

This was a cool little ride.

I enjoyed the layout - I felt you managed to achieve an exciting ride despite not having a loop. The final heartline roll was especially well done and caught me off guard.

I think the supportwork needed a lot of improvement. On the whole it felt rushed but the final helix needed the supports on the inside of the helix so that the steel members are in tension rather than compression (much stronger this way). I don't think having foot choppers really provided enough of a reason to do it the way you did.

Also note the package wasn't compiled correctly so none of the rocks showed up for me.

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