Take the plunge on Cataclysm: Rebirth. An unorthodox Mack coaster with heart-stopping near-misses; steep dives; and coveted air-time! This coaster will have you screaming for another life!
Elements:
Ejector Hill Inclined Norwegian Loop Loop Vertical Dive Loop
I think that you had a few shaping issues leading to some odd forces - such as some crazy high sustained negatives and the feeling of hanging out of the ride at the end of the cyclone element which wouldn't have been much fun. The ride itself had some nice head choppers and the layout was okay. Also workon the settings on that brake run so that it doesn't have to keep decellerating because it picks up too much speed.